Essay title: Mother's Day
By Khizar Dar



Essay title: The Cat



Essay title: An Exciting Day
This essay was written by Harris after going on a trip as a reward for working hard and passing his exams.
The instructions were: 'Write about an exciting experience'.


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Essay title: A Winter Garden by Harris Malik
This essay was written by Harris for the Urmston Grammar 11 Plus exam in 2009, and it earned him a pass.
The instructions were 'Write a description of a winter garden'. I asked him to try and remember what he
wrote, and this is shown below.

The Parrot by Shannon Flannagon.
The essay is taken from an old 11 Plus exam.
Essay Intructions: Write an essay which ends with the words: 'and that is why the
sailor was allowed to keep his parrot'.


Essay title: The Gang by Harris Malik
This essay was written by Harris for the Stretford Grammar 2009 11 Plus exam in 2009, which he passed.
Essay Instructions: 'There is a girl called Cindy being held by a gang. Write an account of how you
try and rescue her'. I asked him to try and remember what he wrote, and this is shown below.